so i've been playing around in FruityLoops lately, and i made a sampled beat.

it's sampled from an old German military march, the Königgrätzer Marsch. i just want some opinions, critiques, all that good stuff, so here it is:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/60…..1304ff36f/

this is my first beat that actually turned out decent IMO, so….yeah

Well, it's a little busy for me to rap to but… not too bad, I have to agree with AK as far as your transition goes, I think it needs to have a little more progression into the beat before you just drop it on us.  Maybe having the bass work into the last half of the chorus or even using one or 2 of the instruments in your verse structure hit during the chorus could help keep the consistency.  Without the transitions, it feels too separated is all.