To be honest man your off beat

listen to the beat more and work on your timing.

I like the desire you have in wanting to create music

but you need to work and practice alot

again keep practicing

work harder everyday push yourself to the limit if i may say lol

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You iz off beat, sum of it sounds ok with the beat but not all the words fall into place, maybe put more spacing into it. Or put less/more words to pick up those certain parts. And the best thing is always for people to tell the truth, if they do not then u will never know what to work on. I also put my music on slicethepie.com and people tell you what they feel about it and that is how it makes u a better artist. If everyone told you that your S$$$ sounds good and it dont u will never know. keep up the work take the advice of everyone that puts there input in and see what works for u.

1 And Only hustla