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Forums Mp3 Audio Tracks Need some feedback (lyrics)

Need some feedback (lyrics)

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9:49 pm
01/20/12


falcon63

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Just wrote a verse to this beat, and wondering if it's any good or not? I want to write an entire song to this beat, but I wanna make sure I can at least get a good opening verse.


Beat:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..re=related


Yeah, bitch you better listen close cause this ain't no fucking soliloquy

I'm speaking to you, the youth, enticing you to fuse with me

In my fight against global terror, also known as the mainstream

Corrupting our children's minds with prophecies of calamity

Preaching ignorance and arrogance to all of our little ones

Stop this belligerence, keeping peace among us is critical

To help build societies that are void of all evil

Land of the people, where the feeble can succeed and be equal

7:28 pm
01/21/12


S. Grapes

Member

posts 16

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im too sony bono to read the lyrics on beat but the beats sick and the lyrics are dope. id be down to jump on. peep “S. Grapes” on soundcloud.com and see whats up.

7:29 pm
01/21/12


S. Grapes

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posts 16

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http://soundcloud.com/s-grapes-1

3:59 pm
01/22/12


falcon63

Member

posts 16

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Thanks.


And I redid the lyrics a bit and think they're MUCh better. I wrote other verses as well, but I'm still tweaking those.


Yeah, bitch you better listen close cause this ain't no fucking soliloquy
I'm speaking to you, the youth, enticing you to use your speech
To fight against global terror, eradicate the enemies
That are corrupting children's minds with prophecies of calamity
Preaching ignorance and arrogance to all of our little ones
Stop belligerence, keeping peace among us is critical
To help build societies that are void of all evil
Land of the people, where the feeble can succeed and be equal, yeah

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