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Forums Mp3 Audio Tracks Need some feedback on lyrics

Need some feedback on lyrics

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7:10 pm
12/10/10


falcon63

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Just wrote this story-telling song to “Shady Deeds”. Tell me HONESTLY what you think. YOU CAN'T HURT MY FEELINGS! 

**** = Hook


#### = Sound Effect


>>>> = Skip

****yeah, i can see

your delirious insanity

but if you take my hand

i'll set you free****


back on top, in my domain

up and runnin this shit again

i'm the greatest, i'm the greatest

i can never be contained


whatever they say, it's all for show

they can never fuck up my flow

when they try, when they try

i say fuck all them bitch ass zoes


fuck the world, fuck society

fuck all those who try to break me

fuck the critics, fuck the emmys

fuck all them cops, judges, and juries


i been crowned, i been crowned

the realest motherfucker here pound-for-pound

cant bring me down, cant bring me down

the only way to stop me is ####click click pow####


****if you believe everything you see

you'll find out eventually

the way the world is

and how they try to decieve****


>>>>


whatever they do, whatever they say

it don't matter, cause im here to stay

aint goin nowhere, aint givin up

whatever they say, i dont give a fuck


dont give a fuck, what they think bout me

if they listen to my lyrics, they will see

that through the fame, through the glory

my words aren't shit, they tell a story


about a man, who's seen it all

from rags to riches, my downfall

from champ to chump, on a dime

i've seen it all in my lifetime


endless love, flushed down the drain

only wanted me, for my fame

on the streets, back again

to that special place, where my story began


had no father, wasn't there

didnt give a fuck, didnt care

in the streets, all alone

no one there, on my own


late at night, my mother would come

blazed as fuck, back to the slum

until one day, she grabbed a knife

and in one second, took her life


no one there, to provide

my only option, to subside

to the life, of a thug

pimpin hoes, doin drugs


in a moment, it all changed

became estranged, let out my rage

in the pen, with no protection

this was my path to redemption


****i dont want forgiveness

i dont deserve it

my victims are scarred for life

because ive been selfish

im dying inside

my heart feels cold

im losing my mind

losing all control****


flashbacks coming, to my mind

wishing id just click rewind

can't go back, already done

leaves behind his only son


why'd i do this, i cant see

now he has, no family

i felt this pain, it hurts real bad

to think i'd do this, makes me sad


been down this road, down it before

feel that ive evened the score

just want to take that same old knife

used by my mom to take her life


stick it in, my cold heart

leave it there, till i rot

have no reason, to survive

cause i took, another's life


****redemption wont comes easy

but i need it badly

to clear my conscious

of all my sinful deeds****


please forgive me, please dont cry

didnt have time, to say goodbye

now hes there, up in the sky

and im down here to apologize


dont deserve, your forgiveness

but im right here, god as my witness

take my hand, ill set you free

please just grant me amnesty


i know its hard, but hes not gone

up there singing, his swan song

your forgiveness, sets me free

nullified my sinful deeds


tried too hard, hit and missed

burned down just like Icarus

redeemed myself, found new love

for that special, place above


****that my story

from start to finish

how in one second

your fame can vanquish****


>>>>


>>>>


****just another player

on gods playing board

anytime he wants

he can pull the cord

life aint a game

its for real

you fuck with destiny

your fate is sealed****

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