Trying to make a rap out of “Shady Deeds” and need some feedback on the lyrics. To me it's pretty obvious what it's about. But either way, lyrics don't have to make sense anyways, as long as they run smooth. They aren't finished yet, but here's what I got so far:

*** = hook

***yeah, i can see

your delirious insanity

but if you take my hand

i'll set you free***

whatever you do, whatever you say

whatever it is that makes me feel this way

how ever far, how ever long

how ever many times that you've been wronged

ill be there, by your side

whatever happens, don't subside

through the pain, through the tears

ill help you to forget your fears

im sorry im hurt you, im sorry i left

i made a mistake, i need you back

whatever the cost, whatever the price

i'd never try put you through this twice

im losin my mind, im losin my mind

i wish i could have just clicked rewind

back to that special place of mine

where everybody seems to be benign

***no matter where you are

in the dusk or dawn

and through the midst of it all

ill be your krypton***

***ill be there

just for you

whatever obstacles

try to break through***

fuck the world, fuck society

fuck all those who try to break me

fuck the critics, fuck the emmys

fuck all them cops, judges, juries

i been crowned, i been crowned

the realest motherfucker here pound-for-pound

cant bring me down, cant bring me down

the only way to stop me is ###click click pow### (gun sound effect at same time)

ayee ur lyricss r strait they cud be better tho

yeah, I realized that, so I made new lyrics…if they suck just tell me, but here they are:

**** = Hook

#### = Sound Effect

>>>> = Skip

****yeah, i can see

your delirious insanity

but if you take my hand

i'll set you free****

back on top, in my domain

up and runnin this shit again

i'm the greatest, i'm the greatest

i can never be contained

whatever they say, it's all for show

they can never fuck up my flow

when they try, when they try

i say fuck all them bitch ass zoes

fuck the world, fuck society

fuck all those who try to break me

fuck the critics, fuck the emmys

fuck all them cops, judges, and juries

i been crowned, i been crowned

the realest motherfucker here pound-for-pound

cant bring me down, cant bring me down

the only way to stop me is ####click click pow####

****if you believe everything you see

you'll find out eventually

the way the world is

and how they try to decieve****

>>>>

whatever they do, whatever they say

it don't matter, cause im here to stay

aint goin nowhere, aint givin up

whatever they say, i dont give a fuck

dont give a fuck, what they think bout me

if they listen to my lyrics, they will see

that through the fame, through the glory

my words aren't bullshit, they tell a story

about a man, who's seen it all

from rags to riches, my downfall

from champ to chump, on a dime

i've seen it all in my lifetime

endless love, flushed down the drain

only wanted me for my fame

on the streets, back again

to that special place where my story began

It's not finished, so I'm still working on it. Basically it's just a story of people doubt and nay-sayers. And it's about being your own self and not caring what people think or say about you.