you should ease off the vocal affects a lil…makes yall sound like robots…and more confidence on the hook singing he is too low comparing to others… but over all its an aight songs
You should work on improving the quality on the 1st vs, 3rd vs, and the hook. All of those are clipping and it sounds like you got some weird effect on em. The quality for the 2nd vs is pretty good, I would say work on ya breath control and improving ya flow. The 2nd vs was the strongest in my opinion tho…keep doin ya thang
the second verse was mine, it was the first time i had recorded with the other two guys and their first time recording period. I appreciate the advice and will relay the information to them on what to do to improve.