I wrote a song as a tribute to my guitarist who O.D. What you guys think bout these lyrics. I want it to be perfect before i record it

Verse 1

He was a you boy in pursuit of fortune & Fame/ He would do whatever it takes to make sure that it came/ He started a band that went by the name/ A Village Idiot/ They were hotter than a flame/ But when nobody was looking he changed/

Hook I know your in paradise/ But I still wish you had life/ I know your in paradise/ But I wish You still had life/ Hopefully We'll meet again one day/ In Paradise

Verse 2

I was a young boy with dreams of makin it big/ So I joined the band/ Played bass like ya man/ Gene Simmons/ For some reason you kept your problems a secret/ Only from me/ When I heard the news things changed/ I couldn't sleep/ And couldn't make the pain ease/ Almost went as far as prescriptions to end this misery/ Then I saw your face/ What you told me was as clear as it gets/ So know hear I am/ Without your guidance/ Ed this is for you/ You'll be missed/ Rest In Peace

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Bridge

The Sun don't shine forever/ Love don't love forever/ Fame eventually dies out/ Friendship travels through lifetimes/

Verse 3

We all search for fortune & fame/ Only some of us actually chase the game/ Few of us make it/ While Others die before they get a chance at it/ So Ed the Village didn't make it/ But I promise I will. This is for you

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