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sick freestyle rap by 17 year old

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3:43 pm
03/13/10

amarsh82592

Member

posts 14

3.3

sick nasty 17 yr old rapper Cool

3:32 pm
03/15/10

Jeffke Vermeulen

Member

posts 6

2.7

don't like your voice, but you did alright for your age man keep it up… off beat sometimes though…

4:11 pm
03/16/10

amarsh82592

Member

posts 14

thanks for the feedback. yeah the voice i obv. cant help ha. some of it is just cause of the mic though. if you put headphones on it sounds hella better. things are a bit off beat because when i record i use mixcraft 4 and it is a little skippy sometimes so i have to adjust the vocals with the beat afterwards so sometimes they arent perfect. thank you though. ill work on get it all down eventually. Laugh

5:35 pm
03/16/10

D.O.A

Member

posts 5

You suck I'm 17 too I'll tear you apart. check it http://www.myspace.com/541nate

Laugh

10:47 pm
03/16/10

amarsh82592

Member

posts 14

D.O.A said:

You suck I'm 17 too I'll tear you apart. check it http://www.myspace.com/541nate

lmfao dude… you've been doin this for 6 and a half years supposedly.. ive been doing it for a couple months so idk what youre trying to prove. and the point of me posting that isnt for negative nancy people like you to come post stupid shit on it. if you dont have some kind of constructive critisism then stfu lol. and sorry i rap about legit stuff and youre rapping about being the badest rapper in oregon and saying youre on top and shit ha. you have like 30 plays on your most played song and like 10 on the other two. so idk why you're running youre mouth. you only have one decent song on there…

3:41 am
08/23/10

lyriclygifted215

Member

posts 4

it was cool fam, lyrics were a lil shakey, delivery was prolly da biggest prolem…it kinda sounded like u were reading straight off a paper. i mean obviously some emcees read straight off a page but they make the verse sound & feel natural…fel wat im sayin?, anyway u get that delivery down and u should be sraight fam keep @ it…& as fo mr “Im 17 andi can rip u” plz fam i dnt mean 2 be an ass but if u wanna step on someon jus tryin 2 get constructive criticism, then i should tell u that ur nowere near sick wit it lol

By the way peep da music…Peace.

http://cayoz.bandcamp.com/albu…..he-mixtape

7:00 am
08/23/10

shoaibkhanz

Member

Pakistan

posts 25

i like it…a lot!

no matter what everyone else says!

Shoaib Khan!

7:27 pm
08/23/10

NeonKue

Member

East Detroit

posts 1

You need more energy my man.

Sounds like your reading off the paper and u sound like your nose is stuffed up.

Plus need better editing, sounds really clipped and staticy

4:32 pm
08/24/10

Ty-J

Member

posts 5

Aye yall chek my musiqq out

http://www.youtube.com/user/TJSpadez Laugh

9:04 pm
08/25/10

Hazzmattikk

Member

posts 6

yo bro, you rhymes are alright, and your delivery is alright, but i agree with what most everyone is saying, you lack energy and enthusiasm and that natural flow/feel to it, but keep up the good work man, im pretty much in the same position as you. Check out my songs here

http://www.myspace.com/hazzmattikk Cool Cool

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