The beat is Tight. I dont understand your verses but they flow with the beat and it sounds like your delivery is on point. The hook is really nice but it sounds like its missing a little something. Her voice is great and so is the lyrics in the hook. SOme parts sound like there a little empty. But all together I think its a dope track.
A word of advice when you ask for feedback though. People who leave comments and just talk ish should be disregarded completly. That's called a hater. SOmeone who actually listened and didnt like it would tell you why they felt how they did. Keep doing your thing. -AkA
The beat is Tight. I dont understand your verses but they flow with the beat and it sounds like your delivery is on point. The hook is really nice but it sounds like its missing a little something. Her voice is great and so is the lyrics in the hook. SOme parts sound like there a little empty. But all together I think its a dope track.
A word of advice when you ask for feedback though. People who leave comments and just talk ish should be disregarded completly. That's called a hater. SOmeone who actually listened and didnt like it would tell you why they felt how they did. Keep doing your thing. -AkA