Mixed views, the hook is catchy enough but lyrically is abysmal Your lyrics also switch between on point and pretty weak, I loved the bit about people, evil and equals, but really…why does sad make us mad? C'mon that's elementary rhymes XD Not bad on the whole tho, 7/10, maybe mix the vocals a tiny bit louder, but your stepping it up I'm actually gonna be doing a song with the very same beat shortly, so I'd love to hear your views on that when I post the link, 100% honesty too, good and bad Holla, ZB

and ill for sure check ur version out

ite dog, just let me know

aye dude, same as ziggy, don't take this as hatin 

because i dont hate, i feel its a waste of time and emotions

but the first time i hrd u i thought u was pretty weak [not wack, but weak] i think the track was hatin these flows

but this is BY FAR better

we as artists improve daily , otherwise we have no business being in the business

u've taken major steps towards improving

this is not coming from a ''god'' n i need improvement too 

but i like this track, keep em comin, n keep em comin strong,, n hopefully we can collab later ya feel me

keep it 100 

yung jay

http://www.myspace.com/yungjay…..athemastaj